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A Halloween Ghost Story

Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:29 PM EDT
not-news, parenting, humor, halloween, personal-narratives, ghost-story
By etva

By the Light of the Moon; © 2010 by etva

Beware the Demon Dog; © 2010 by etva

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It's that time of year, when tales of ghosts and goblins keep sweet, little children awake at night. I personally feel that no childhood is complete without a night of spooky stories, and the joy of being scared silly.

I still remember my very first fright night, which took place during a sleepover with a childhood friend. After a relatively tame ghost story, her father snuck outside to tap on the windows. Our screams could be heard for miles, and I couldn't sleep in the dark for a month!

My own sons are not so easily frightened, so last year, I decided they were old enough to hear about our real ghost, who still resides not so very far away.


When I was a little girl, my brother and I would wander around our farm looking for adventure. One day, we discovered a dilapidated house just beyond our woods, where an old lady lived with her two large dogs. Each day, we’d hide behind a row of box bushes and spy on her, and we couldn’t help but notice that she was always alone. No one ever came to visit her.

When we asked our parents about her, they explained that she was the last living member of her family, and preferred a solitary existence. They warned us to stay away and not disturb her privacy, but we were young and curious and determined to keep up our secret vigil.

After many months, we arrived one day to the sounds of wild howling coming from inside the house. For a moment we were paralyzed with fear. Then we took off down the path, back to the safety of our front yard.

But children are resilient, and so we bravely returned the next day to face our fears. The dogs were still howling, and when they caught a glimpse of us, they started jumping against the window.

I think that was the first and last time I ever ran a 2-minute mile.

That night, my brother and I were plagued with nightmares, and we finally confessed our sin to our parents. Several nights later, we overheard them whispering in the kitchen, and only then did we discover the true horror of our experience.

It turns out, the old lady had died, but no one knew, and her corpse lay in the house for many nights, with her two big, dogs howling their distress. We never actually saw her decomposing body, but our imaginations created a vivid picture of the gory scene.

Weeks passed, but the old lady’s house remained empty, and my brother and I soon decided that we should stop by, just to prove we were brave enough. When we reached the edge of her property, we peered over the box bushes. All was quiet, so we took a step forward, and then a few more, and before we knew it, we were at the front door.

Now in those days, everyone in our village knew everyone else, and nobody ever locked their doors, so it came as no surprise, when the door easily swung open, though neither of us quite remembers turning the handle. We stepped inside and were shocked to find all the furniture completely shredded. Tables were knocked over and broken glass lay on the floor. We carefully stepped around the mess and peered into the kitchen.

Just then, we heard a noise upstairs.

Now I’m convinced that we would have gone upstairs to investigate, but suddenly the front door slammed shut. About the same time, a branch hit the kitchen window, and the pane shattered.

The next thing I remember is my brother and I racing through the yard away from the old lady’s house, but just as we reached the box bushes, we heard dogs growling. We glanced into the woods, and saw two dogs standing next to a fence – a fence surrounding a graveyard; a graveyard with a fresh grave.

I don’t remember how we got home, but it wasn’t long before rumors of ghosts spread through our little village. People complained of howling during the night, and even the huntsmen refused to use the trail that passed by the house, because their horses became skittish and consistently tried to bolt away.

Over the years, my brother and I frequently passed by the house, but we never went alone, and almost always, you could hear dogs howling somewhere close by. As teenagers, we taunted our friends with tales of ghost sightings, and dared them to enter the house, which by now, had caved in upon itself, creating eerie shadows that shifted when the wind blew.

The stories grew to mythical proportions, when several teenaged boys vanished, and it was whispered that they were camping near the ghost house. No trace of them was ever found, and it’s said that their restless spirits can still be seen haunting what remains of the old house.

Eventually, the children in our village grew up, and the stories surrounding the property were forgotten, until last year when I shared it with a new generation. They assured me, that it wasn’t at all scary, but for some reason, not one of them wanted to go for a walk in the woods that night.

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etva

The midnight walk is planned. This Halloween, the local riff raff is going ghost hunting!

  • 8 votes
Reply#1 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:31 PM EDT
Gnosis13

That dog just looks confused :)

You want scary? If you can handle a video game, go grab a Playstation 2 and a copy of " Fatal Frame".

Scariest sh!t, ever.

  • 2 votes
Reply#2 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:33 PM EDT
etva

Some fool gifted my kids with a playstation 2 last year, so I'll keep my eyes open for Fatal Frame, but it sounds as if it's not appropriate for elementary aged kids? (My sons teach me how to play - sigh.)

  • 3 votes
#2.1 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:36 PM EDT
Gnosis13

Its not very bloody at all, but I first played it when I was 16. Gave me some of the worst night terrors of my life.

Look for it at a Gamestop. They will at least point you in the right direction.

  • 2 votes
#2.2 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:38 PM EDT
etva

LOL -- Gamestop? I'll have to hike to the city for that:) I'll put the word out with our local teenagers that I'd like to borrow a copy. I'll see if we can set it up for a Halloween run. Thanks for the recommendation.

  • 2 votes
#2.3 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:41 PM EDT
Gnosis13

You can always use Amazon.com

I do, anyway. Helps with the harder to find stuff.

  • 2 votes
#2.4 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:42 PM EDT
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Remote Viewer

Wonderful story, etva!

  • 3 votes
Reply#3 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:35 PM EDT
etva

Thank you RV. Do you and Bitemore want to join us for the walk? (Evil Grin)

  • 3 votes
#3.1 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 5:37 PM EDT
Remote Viewer

I'm all for it, if I can stay awake that late on a Sunday night ... big if. Not so sure about Bitey. :-)

  • 3 votes
#3.2 - Thu Oct 7, 2010 8:52 AM EDT
etva

We could drive her to the spot early (dressed in white, wrapped in a sheet?) and meet up with her. (snicker)

  • 2 votes
#3.3 - Thu Oct 7, 2010 8:56 AM EDT
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Holly-348328

I'll go on the walk with you! Wonderful story, etva.

  • 3 votes
Reply#4 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 6:08 PM EDT
etva

Thank you Holly. I'm really looking forward to it, though I suspect there might be a few who back out at the last minute:)

  • 3 votes
#4.1 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 6:11 PM EDT
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BK Lim

...but no one knew, and her corpse lay in the house for many nights, with her two big, dogs howling their distress.

Etva, what happened to the 2 dogs?

Scary. I think I will skip that walk. Thanks for the story ((((((etva))))))

  • 2 votes
Reply#5 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 7:15 PM EDT
etva

(((((BK)))))) I honestly don't know what happened to the dogs -- if I had to guess, I'd say the dogs we saw next to the graveyard really were her dogs, and they roamed wild for awhile. Eventually, someone must have caught them, because we've never found any dog bones in that area. They would have probably been taken to one of the local farms somewhere.

Once winter takes out some of the underbrush, I'm going to try and find the graveyard and get some pictures. There's actually not much of the house left. It looks like a mound, but it's actually a big hole that was once the basement. LOL

  • 2 votes
#5.1 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 9:46 PM EDT
dmlane

Looking forward to those pictures!

btw got your framed on my site...

  • 3 votes
#5.2 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 9:48 PM EDT
BK Lim

Keep those stories and pictures coming. Enjoy reading them.

  • 3 votes
#5.3 - Thu Oct 7, 2010 7:56 AM EDT
Abby.

I'm looking forward to pics as well!
Great story E!

  • 3 votes
#5.4 - Thu Jul 28, 2011 2:11 AM EDT
etva

Thanks Abby!

  • 2 votes
#5.5 - Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:47 AM EDT
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dmlane

My cat is scarrier than that dog ~ rummaging through abondaned houses sounds good for a Halloween night ~ :)

  • 2 votes
Reply#6 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 7:25 PM EDT
etva

LOL -- apparently my demon dog doesn't scare too many people. It was the best I could come up with at the moment. Is your cat a battle survivor? I agree, I've seen some pretty scary barn cats.

Unless I prearrange some excitement (always a possibility), the journey to the house will be scarier than the house, since there's not much left of it. But they don't know that! (Evil Grin)

  • 4 votes
#6.1 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 9:51 PM EDT
dmlane

Well he weighs in at 22 pds and just back down a full grown german shepard today.

I sure you can arrange some interesting entertainment for them once they get there :)~

  • 3 votes
#6.2 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 9:57 PM EDT
etva

Snicker -- now THAT's a CAT! He doesn't look that big or fierce in his picture. He looks quite respectable even:)

  • 2 votes
#6.3 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 10:07 PM EDT
dmlane

He puts on a good front or if I scratch under his chin for half an hour...but he does have cattitude...

  • 2 votes
#6.4 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 10:13 PM EDT
etva

Best kind!

  • 2 votes
#6.5 - Wed Oct 6, 2010 10:16 PM EDT
redshadowwithgreenbackground

Great story

  • 1 vote
#6.6 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 11:42 PM EDT
etva

Thank you Red Shadow!

  • 1 vote
#6.7 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 11:45 PM EDT
StevG-144

Neat story etva, and a scary one for the kids and a very nice read, thanks for sharing it with us

  • 2 votes
#6.8 - Wed Jul 27, 2011 11:46 AM EDT
etva

Thanks Steve! I think I'm going to need to up the ante this year. My kids don't scare as easily:)

  • 3 votes
#6.9 - Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:27 PM EDT
BK Lim

etva,

maybe the horror story of "BP's 3 wishing wells and the walking dead victims in the Gulf" might.

Sorry if it is a bad joke. LOL

  • 3 votes
#6.10 - Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:41 PM EDT
etva

Not at all, BK, it's an excellent theme for a horror story, and probably one they can relate to.

Good to see you on the Vine. How have you been?

  • 4 votes
#6.11 - Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:47 PM EDT
BK Lim

personally, I am well but the collateral damage is immense and that is where I am more worried about.

  • 2 votes
#6.12 - Thu Jul 28, 2011 1:39 AM EDT
etva

I'm so sorry to hear that, BK, but somehow not surprised. It's so easy for them to fight dirty, from their positions of power and money.

  • 1 vote
#6.13 - Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:49 AM EDT
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K-joy

I dig your pictures, shutter bug!

I can't wait to read about your spooky walk. I have a feeling the boys will think your story is much more scary in the dark.

  • 3 votes
Reply#7 - Thu Oct 7, 2010 11:25 AM EDT
Vlad's dog

Now that story made me chilly, where is my sweater, bbrrrrrrrrrrr. A wonderful story and a wonderful reading experience for me. Thank you. :)

  • 4 votes
Reply#8 - Thu Oct 7, 2010 12:22 PM EDT
Michigan born

That is the best childhood spook story I believe I have ever heard. Perfect for a campfire ghost story. Great story.

  • 3 votes
Reply#9 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 12:29 AM EDT
etva

Thank you MB. It's my only ghost story, so I have to make it work - LOL.

  • 3 votes
#9.1 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 12:33 AM EDT
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MoonCrow

Hi evta ... Very enjoyable story ... reminded me of some of my childhood ghost adventures. Thanks for posting.

  • 2 votes
Reply#10 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 10:42 AM EDT
etva

Thanks MoonCrow. One of the best things about kids, I think, is reliving some of my own childhood memories:)

  • 1 vote
#10.1 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 11:03 AM EDT
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Jerseygirl1978

Your dog looks like the chocolate version of my dog, Simba! They could be related. By the way etva, I may clip this to VWZ, if you don't mind?

  • 2 votes
Reply#11 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 6:42 PM EDT
etva

Thanks Jerseygirl. I didn't incude it to VWZ, because, well, there were none - LOL. I'm still not all clear about what to post where, so I err on the side of caution.

Edit: Wait, are you saying my dog might be a werewolf? LOL:)

  • 2 votes
#11.1 - Sat Oct 9, 2010 6:45 PM EDT
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Kori

Great story etva! Enjoyed it and could easily visualize the kids, the dogs, the old lady, and the house. Where would the setting be? That is NO demon dog. He looks like he would jump right up in your lap and lick you to death.

Back years ago, when my grandparents and great grandparents were alive, people in the south either buried their dead on the community church property or had a family plot somewhere on privately owned property/ As kids, ,y cousin and I would visit Price's graveyard deep in the woods. It was a family burial plot, had no idea who the Pirces were. Their cemetary had graves with old small rock slabs hand carved with name, year born and died. Died was Did. We would visit and hang around looking at the headstones, then suddently she would get spooked and I would get spooked and we'd run all the way back to my grandparents house. Good times. To this day, I enjoy meandering through cemetaries. They are always peaceful and interesting.

  • 2 votes
Reply#12 - Wed Oct 13, 2010 12:31 AM EDT
etva

Hi Kori, thanks for stopping by. The setting is a rural community in Virginia. It's not at all unusual to have small family grave yards around here. In some cases, the houses no longer stand, so it looks like a few tombstones in the middle of the field. That always bugs me. Few people have fences around their plots, or if they did, most are gone. The locals try to maintain the plots, but life frequently gets in the way.

I'm going to try and get some pictures of this graveyard later in the year. The wooded area isn't used much now, so it's very overgrown, and I'm not up for battling nature to get to it. I'll wait for winter to do the job. I'll take a picture of the house, but honestly, it looks like a vine covered mound now -- not much to see:)

    #12.1 - Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:29 AM EDT
    Kori

    My grandparents, great-and great-great grandparents lived in south-central Virginia, just east of Appomatox. They arrived there from southwest corner of Vriginia because the land was better for farming, not as rocky. Spent alot of summers there as a child and remember when we stayed at my great grandfather's house before he died, we used an outhouse, chamber pots at night, grew, canned, killed our own food. Cooked on a huge woodburning stove. Had chickens, horses, cows, and pigs. Grew tobacco to sell. Lots of fun, good memories. Sometimes I can still smell the cooking and various places around the farm. There was a community church that everyone went to just down the road and it existed before the signing of the Declaration of Independence. Interesting place. Families have been in the area for many generations.

    Look forward to seeing your pictures. :-)

    • 3 votes
    #12.2 - Wed Oct 13, 2010 6:48 PM EDT
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    mightyj

    Great story etva. (:

    • 4 votes
    Reply#13 - Mon Aug 1, 2011 5:21 PM EDT
    etva

    Thanks JJ. I need to revamp it, so to speak, before our next Halloween:)

    • 3 votes
    #13.1 - Mon Aug 1, 2011 6:02 PM EDT
    BK Lim

    always looking forward to a good scary story

    • 2 votes
    #13.2 - Mon Aug 1, 2011 7:10 PM EDT
    etva

    Thanks BK! I'll work on some new ones:)

    • 2 votes
    #13.3 - Mon Aug 1, 2011 7:12 PM EDT
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